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La Sonata del Lobo Azul

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Kiara: Desde mi alma puedo ver aquel animal,
rodeandome al ritmo de cada tonada del musical.
No le hablo y ese animal no me habla,
aparece hasta que mi vista se dobla.

Azul es su color del cuerpo como el color de mi alma,
gira alrededor de mi con ojos como los mios.
No puedo dejar de tocar la sonata hasta verlo desaparecer,
mi tonada no se detendra hasta que mi violin se rompa.

Me siento como un un ser que flota,
alrededor de espesa niebla azul que sigue al animal.
Mi cabello cubre mis piernas,
y bloqueando mi presenentimiento de tener piernas

El tiene una cola cortada,
pero tengo el presentimiento que antes era como el mio.
Mis manos estan cansadas pero no se detienen de tocar la melodia,
Estoy exhausto, quiero detenerme, pero esa bestia atrae mi atencion.

- Kiara
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Kiara: From my soul i can see that animal,
surrounding me in the rythm of each tone of the musical.
I don't talk to it and the animal don't talk to me,
It appear until my sight gets doubled.

Blue is the colour of it's body like the colour of my soul,
Spin around of me with eyes like mine.
I can't stop of play the sonata until see it dissapear,
my tones will not going to stop until my violin breaks.

I feel like a thing who floats,,
surrounded by a wide blue fog that follows the animal.
My hair is covering my legs,
and blocking my feeling of that i have legs.

He has a scar tail,
but i have the feeling that before it was like mine.
My hands are already tired but they don't stop playing the melody,
I'm exhausted, i want to stop, but the beast attract my attencion.

-Kiara
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

this is very Awesome looking,but for me I just think your went a little too dark on the shading.
try this: use the airbrush for shading,then use the blur tool to make it smooth and blend a bit with the original color.

I have seen spirit pictures,and music playing,but I have to admit
I've never seen a pic with both of those combined
The Technique is good,I like how the Spirit/Soul is formed.
Very well done on that part.
You could have added some lumonosity to the Soul/spirit but it's lovely the way it is at the moment,but it's still gonna be awesome no matter what^^